Here is pages 3 & 4, the only open spread page of the story.
Originally a 1- page sequence, (the director side of me) decided to push more of the travel panels by streching them across 2 pages in wide panels...and keeping the original amount of dialog.
Side note: These pages longer than planned due to locking down the logo design.
But worth it I think! ;)
-Mach
Nice read flow, looks like a fun story to read, can't wait to see the whole thing!
ReplyDeleteDitto to what Mike said. Way to bust out of the grid Mark. I like the revise. Black and white definitely suits your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys for the nice comments! Looking forward to reading your work too!
ReplyDelete-Mach!