Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Second Color Iteration - Page One

The first version felt a bit too green to me, so I revised it. (Note: the transparent black border denotes the trim area.)

2 comments:

  1. Between the two, I like this one better. Breathes more.

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  2. I was kinda diggin' the border as a design element. I like this version better of the 2 though. Excited to read the story.

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